Saturday, October 24, 2009

Ice Cubes - 24 October 2009

Here are some more poems written with my dad. These are called ice cubes, and are one-word, four-line stanza poems. Each participant writes a word, and passes onto the next person.

IC 1:
Hesitation,
procrastination,
ambivalence,
decision.

Pathway
through
pupil
vision

exhaled
into
thoughts
unshared.

IC 2:
Universally
sharing
words
rhythmically

why
wondering
is
deadly

when
timeless
hours
converge.

1 comment:

  1. my favorite is the late stanza. the second stanza is heavy

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